Spielberg gets all Spielbergian on The BFG: 7 great story tricks we learned from the cinematic giant

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Director Steven Spielberg on the set of Disney's THE BFG, based on the best-sellling book by Roald Dahl. Photo courtesy: Disney Pictures

Director Steven Spielberg on the set of Disney’s THE BFG, based on the best-sellling book by Roald Dahl. Photo courtesy: Disney Pictures

Steven Spielberg’s first film project for Disney, The BFG, opens Friday and is based on the book with the same name by Roald Dahl. It’s about a little girl named Sophie (Ruby Barnhill) who befriends a giant (Mark Rylance) and discovers the wonders and perils of dream hunting.

Given that Spielberg is undoubtedly a master storyteller when it comes to action adventure films, we took a closer look at his techniques to see how they apply to screenwriting. Here are seven ways Spielberg gets all Spielbergian on storytelling.

A young girl named Sophie (Ruby Barnhill) goes on the adventure of a lifetime. Photo courtesy: Disney Pictures

A young girl named Sophie (Ruby Barnhill) goes on the adventure of a lifetime. Photo courtesy: Disney Pictures

No. 1 — Go to the dark side

In a typical Hollywood narrative arc, characters must be tested and the happy ending must be earned. The more hardship a character endures, the more we root for him or her to prevail – especially when that character is a child.

Spielberg’s secret to telling powerful stories about children lies in his ability to weave just the right amount of darkness into a story. In The BFG, 10-year-old Sophie goes to live in Giant Country, where most of the giants eat children – a terribly frightening prospect that adds a big dose of danger to what could have been just a happy-go-lucky kids’ book.

“Being able to be scary and redemptive at the same time, and teach a lesson, an enduring lesson, to everyone—it was a wonderful thing for Dahl to have done, and it was one of the things that attracted me to want to direct this Dahl book…Without that dark center, where is the redemption, and how do you bring all of us out from the bowels of a nightmare into the most beautiful, enchanting dream we’d ever seen?” said Spielberg about Dahl’s book in the press notes provided by Disney.

Look for ways to balance darkness with redemption and evil with kindness and your script will have the story heft that Speilberg loves.

Photo courtesy: Disney Pictures

Photo courtesy: Disney Pictures

No. 2 — Dream all day

Many of us were told not to daydream when we were kids. As writers, daydreaming is our biggest asset and the key to writing a screenplay that will blow minds. “I don’t dream at night, I dream at day, I dream all day; I’m dreaming for living,” Spielberg has been quoted as saying.

We see this life motto translating into cinematic wonder. In the film, the Big Friendly Giant collects dreams and stores them in jars, emphasizing how important dreams are to humanity, or “human beans” as he calls them.

Even if you’re writing a crime drama or romcom, allow yourself to daydream about your characters. You might find new inspiration in how you shape their lives by letting your mind wander.

Photo courtesy: Disney Pictures

Photo courtesy: Disney Pictures

No. 3 — Take your time getting to the good stuff

Storytelling isn’t a race.

In fact, writing a screenplay is more about rewriting, since you’ll most likely spend a lot more time fixing your script once you’ve typed it into Final Draft.

Spielberg has also been quoted as saying, “All good ideas start out as bad ideas, that’s why it takes so long.” Don’t judge yourself, just keep working on your idea until it feels authentic to you. Then rewrite, rewrite, rewrite.

Disney's THE BFG is the imaginative story of a young girl named Sophie (Ruby Barnhill) and the Big Friendly Giant (Oscar (TM) winner Mark Rylance) who introduces her to the wonders and perils of Giant Country. Directed by Steven Spielberg, the film is based on the beloved book by Roald Dahl.

Photo courtesy: Disney Pictures

No. 4 — Don’t be boring

Of course, that’s easier said than done, but if you’re part of a writer’s group or like to get feedback from others, ask your readers if they were bored at any point while reading your script.

If so, go into that area of your story and spice it up. “The thing that I’m just scared to death of is that someday I’m going to wake up and bore somebody with a film,” Spielberg has also been quoted as saying. It’s a fear we all have, but there are ways to attack the problem. Get feedback and focus on the areas where you can improve.

No. 5 — You don’t need to attend a fancy film school

Legend has it Spielberg applied to USC’s film school, but couldn’t get in due to his poor grades. He attended Cal State Long Beach, but dropped out when he was offered a film contract. Making his first film as a 11-year-old to earn his Boy Scout photography badge, it was Spielberg’s passion and dedication that brought him success as a director, according to TIME Magazine.

If you have a passion for writing screenplays, it likely came from something in your own childhood. Think about what that might have been and how that manifests in your work as an adult.

No. 6 — Structure is king

Even with such incredible source material like Dahl’s book, screenwriter Melissa Mathison had to make additions and changes to make the story into a satisfying movie with a 3-act structure.

Spielberg also wanted to further develop the relationship between Sophie and The BFG. About story structure, Spielberg has been quoted as saying, “People have forgotten how to tell a story. Stories don’t have a middle or an end any more. They usually have a beginning that never stops beginning.”

Make sure the second and third acts of your screenplay are fully developed. Act one should ask a question that gets answered in act three. In The BFG, Sophie is an orphan and wonders if she’ll ever feel part of a family in act one. In act three, we see her living in a little cottage next to the giant, with whom she has developed a very close relationship, becoming his family.

Photo courtesy: Disney Pictures

Photo courtesy: Disney Pictures

No. 7 — Read everything you can (even books!)

In addition to watching movies, it’s important to read screenplays as well. But don’t forget about books. Yes, those things collecting dust on your shelves. Reading opens your mind, stokes your creativity and helps to understand points of view that are different than your own. As Spielberg said in his 1986 Oscar acceptance speech, “But only a generation of readers will spawn a generation of writers.”  It’s true.

The BFG opens Friday, July 1.

What have you learned from Spielberg over the years? What are you favorite story moments from the iconic director?

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Shanee Edwards graduated from UCLA Film School with an MFA in Screenwriting and is currently the film critic for SheKnows.com. She recently won the Next MacGyver television writing competition to create a TV show about a female engineer. Her pilot, Ada and the Machine, is currently in development with America Ferrera's Take Fountain Productions. You can follow her on Twitter: @ShaneeEdwards

5 Replies to "Spielberg gets all Spielbergian on The BFG: 7 great story tricks we learned from the cinematic giant"

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    Alexis Krasilovsky, Professor of Screenwriting, Dept. of Cinema and Television Arts, Cal. State U. Northridge July 1, 2016 (6:50 pm)

    Why is “The BGF” screenwriter Melissa Mathison only minimally mentioned in this “Screenwriting” magazine article about screenwriting? Is it because auteurs trump screenwriters,? Is just another example of gender marginalization in Hollywood? Is it because the accomplishments of the dead are already being forgotten? Or is “Screenwriting” planning an article in tribute to Melissa Mathison in another issue?

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      Jenna Milly July 1, 2016 (8:22 pm)

      Great point, Alexis! We would love to hear more about what you’d like to see in the Melissa article. Send us your thoughts. I’ll also email you. Thanks!

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    Harriet Bigus Koppel July 3, 2016 (5:29 am)

    Oh thANK YOU SO MUCH for the SPIELBURG STUFF. IT’S MARVELOUS…WILL continue to think about and see
    the notes I’ve written. It answers all my questions probably….marvelous again!

    His
    dream about”…is like Van Gogh and Gaughin..”thinking about” so that in the painting they just move on..
    definitely without any more ..”thinking about”….

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    Harriet Bigus Koppel July 3, 2016 (5:30 am)

    I typed it once and it was as marvelous as the article……

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    T.D. July 21, 2016 (8:57 am)

    Spielberg began my dream of being a story teller at the age of 10 with E.T. I’ll never forget sitting in the front row of the theater, looking back and seeing all those people being mesmerized by what was on the screen. Even to this day I hold him in the highest regard as the worlds best visual storyteller (with Christopher Nolan coming in super close) I’m all ears with anything this guy has to say, and he continues to be a major inspiration to the stories I tell today. Spielberg is also a big time gamer. What’s not to love?

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